Wednesday, May 18, 2011

Like the candle flame
their love
finds its meaning
only in the dark.
In the daylight
they are like strangers.
An acknowledgemnet of acquaintance
is a mere formality
that they exercise
with several others.
He has a family
on this shoulders
and she has a society
to answer
Yet
the best place to dwell, they know
is in each other's arms.

He bought her diamonds the other day
and a dress a week ago
But they do not seem to
enchant her anymore.
Why she keeps on asking
the same question
"Do you really love me?"
He has affirmed the statement
a thousand times.
Why would he sprinkle the reward
of his hard earned labour
on someone he doesnt?
Of course he does.
More than any woman on the planet.
Atleast this is what he says.

Stupid woman,
Stupid desires.
Diamonds do not content her
Now she wants everything
His house
His family
Even his name.
Her wadrobe has a section for
a box of vermillion
but its empty
and she knows
that it will always be.
Because she is the 'other woman'
in his life
And no matter how much he proclaims
inside those four walls
his love for her,
the 'other woman'
she will always be.

7 comments:

Rahul Chaurasia said...

Good... Keep writing..

Unknown said...

Beautifully portrayed pain of the 'Other Woman' who is made to pay for the mistakes committed by a man in marrying someone he did not like.

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Rahul Chaurasia said...

Gautam bhaiya.. Pls also read and comment on rahulchaurasia.blogspot.com

Sakshi said...

Feelings beautifully expressed............ good keep going.

Rahul Chaurasia said...

Your poem inspired me to right a reply... I just posted on my blog.

http://rahulchaurasia.blogspot.com/

its a poet's imagination and answer from a male that the other women is not always a choice but a force he has to reckon with deep within.. rest you read and comment...

Unknown said...

Rahul Bhaiya!! Done. Please check.